homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.Those apples are bad.Don't eat them.
2.I don't know this girl.Do you know her?
3.Alan never drinks milk.He does't like it.
4.Where are the children?Have you seen them?
5.I can't find my pencil.Can you give one to me?
In physical education time I ran!!
Then!!My leg is fracture....
It's very uncomfortable.ㅠㅠ
강사 첨삭
Hi TOM^^
Happy Monday! Oh!I\'m sorry to hear that your leg was fractured. =c What happened? I hope you will feel beter soon. Congratulations! You got a perfect a score.It was easy am I right?Your grammar skills are improving.We have to work on more with your sentence structure. Learn more new vocabulary words for your sentences.Take Care!See you later.
Teacher Nina
Here are my corrections for you:
1.Those apples are bad.Don\'t eat them.
>> Correct!2.I don\'t know this girl.Do you know her?
>> Correct!3.Alan never drinks milk.He does\'t like it.
>> Correct!4.Where are the children?Have you seen them?
>> Correct!5.I can\'t find my pencil.Can you give one to me?
>> Correct!In physical education time I ran!!
>> In my physical education class I ran.Then!!My leg is fracture....
>> My leg was fractured.It\'s very uncomfortable.ㅠㅠ
>> Correct
OR >> I feel uncomfortable.
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