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2013-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I usually use a subway when I commute. And I always read a book in a subway. I tried to read a novel in a subway. But it was difficult. Because a lot of people in the subway. I couldn't concentrate my book. So, I decided to read comic book in stead of novel in a subway. 1.A person who makes clothes for a living is called a b. tailor 2.He joined the navy because he wanted to be a ___. c. sailor 3.In the winter my pipes froze and I had to call a ___. b. plumber 4.A person who makes bouquets and wreaths is called a ___. c. florist 5.A ___ broke into their house through an open window. a. burglar 6.The ___ declared that the player was out. b. umpire 7.The people who load and unload ships are called ___. c. dockers 8.A person who makes things out of wood is called a ___. c. carpenter 9.She was the youngest ___ ever to win an election. a. candidate 10.Someone who betrays their country is called a ___. c. traitor:

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Hi [이름]^^ Happy Monday!! How are you? I hope you are doing fine.It\'s a brand new week for us.Please go over the corrections I provided for you. Let us work on with the usage of your articles.Congratulations!You got a perfect score!Keep up the good work!I am so happy that you were able to give me correct answers today.See you soon!Take Care! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: I usually use a subway when I commute. >> I usually use the subway when I travel. And I always read a book in a subway. >> And I always read a book in the subway. I tried to read a novel in a subway. >> I tried to read a novel in the subway But it was difficult. Because a lot of people in the subway. >> But it was difficult because there are a lot of people in the subway. I couldn\'t concentrate my book. >> I couldn\'t concentrate with my book. OR >> I couldn\'t concentrate witth the book that I am reading. So, I decided to read comic book in stead of novel in a subway. >> So I decided to read a comic book instead of a novel in the subway.1.A person who makes clothes for a living is called a b. tailor>> Correct!2.He joined the navy because he wanted to be a ___.c. sailor>> Correct!3.In the winter my pipes froze and I had to call a ___.b. plumber>> Correct!4.A person who makes bouquets and wreaths is called a ___.c. florist>> Correct!5.A ___ broke into their house through an open window.a. burglar>> Correct!6.The ___ declared that the player was out.b. umpire>> Correct!7.The people who load and unload ships are called ___.c. dockers>> Correct!8.A person who makes things out of wood is called a ___.c. carpenter>> Correct!9.She was the youngest ___ ever to win an election.a. candidate>> Correct!10.Someone who betrays their country is called a ___.c. traitor: >> Correct!

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