homework~
학생이 쓴 원문
1.Could I have a ___ of ice cream?
b. scoop
2.Could I have a ___ of milk?
c. carton
3.Could I have a ___ of wine?
a. bottle
4.Could I have a ___ of chocolate?
b. bar
5.Could I have a ___ of tea?
a. cup
6.Could I have a ___ of lemon?
b. slice
7.Could I have a ___ of cheese?
c. piece
8.Could I have a ___ of cake?
c. slice
9.Could I have a ___ of jam?
a. jar
10.Do we need a ___ of bread?
a. loaf
Today, I helped several chinese students. They wanted to know the location where an entrance ceremony was held. We couldn't communicate properly at first. Because I can't speak chinese and they can't speak korean. Also, we both can't speak english well. But we came to understanding. So I could help them after all.
강사 첨삭
Hi there again [이름]^^
You\'re a good person! I felt happy about your story because you tried your best to understand each other.It is a good attitude of your because you didn\'t give up. Good job with your homework! I think these vocabulary words is really easy for you. Am I right? I hope that you are going to have a nice day!See you soon!
Teacher Nina
Here are my corrections for you:
1.Could I have a ___ of ice cream?b. scoop>> Correct!2.Could I have a ___ of milk?c. carton>> Correct!3.Could I have a ___ of wine?a. bottle>> Correct!
4.Could I have a ___ of chocolate?b. bar>> Correct!5.Could I have a ___ of tea?a. cup>> Correct!6.Could I have a ___ of lemon?b. slice>> Correct!7.Could I have a ___ of cheese?c. piece>> Correct!8.Could I have a ___ of cake?c. slice>> Correct!9.Could I have a ___ of jam?a. jar>> Correct!10.Do we need a ___ of bread?a. loaf>> Correct!Today, I helped several chinese students.
>> Today, I helped several Chinese students. (Chinese should be written in caiptal letters because it is a proper noun.)^^
They wanted to know the location where an entrance ceremony was held.
>> They wanted to know the location where the entrance ceremony will be held.
We couldn\'t communicate properly at first.
>> We couldn\'t communicate well at first.
OR >> We couldn\'t understand each other at first.
Because I can\'t speak chinese and they can\'t speak korean.
>> Because I can\'t speak Chinese and they can\'t speak Korean. (Chinese and Korean should be written in caiptal letters because it is a proper noun.)^^
Also, we both can\'t speak english well.
>> Both of use can\'t speak in English well.
But we came to understanding.
>> But we were able to understand each other at the end.
So I could help them after all.
>> So I was able to help them after all.
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