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2013-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.Could I have a ___ of ice cream? b. scoop 2.Could I have a ___ of milk? c. carton 3.Could I have a ___ of wine? a. bottle 4.Could I have a ___ of chocolate? b. bar 5.Could I have a ___ of tea? a. cup 6.Could I have a ___ of lemon? b. slice 7.Could I have a ___ of cheese? c. piece 8.Could I have a ___ of cake? c. slice 9.Could I have a ___ of jam? a. jar 10.Do we need a ___ of bread? a. loaf Today, I helped several chinese students. They wanted to know the location where an entrance ceremony was held. We couldn't communicate properly at first. Because I can't speak chinese and they can't speak korean. Also, we both can't speak english well. But we came to understanding. So I could help them after all.

강사 첨삭

Hi there again [이름]^^ You\'re a good person! I felt happy about your story because you tried your best to understand each other.It is a good attitude of your because you didn\'t give up. Good job with your homework! I think these vocabulary words is really easy for you. Am I right? I hope that you are going to have a nice day!See you soon! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.Could I have a ___ of ice cream?b. scoop>> Correct!2.Could I have a ___ of milk?c. carton>> Correct!3.Could I have a ___ of wine?a. bottle>> Correct! 4.Could I have a ___ of chocolate?b. bar>> Correct!5.Could I have a ___ of tea?a. cup>> Correct!6.Could I have a ___ of lemon?b. slice>> Correct!7.Could I have a ___ of cheese?c. piece>> Correct!8.Could I have a ___ of cake?c. slice>> Correct!9.Could I have a ___ of jam?a. jar>> Correct!10.Do we need a ___ of bread?a. loaf>> Correct!Today, I helped several chinese students. >> Today, I helped several Chinese students. (Chinese should be written in caiptal letters because it is a proper noun.)^^ They wanted to know the location where an entrance ceremony was held. >> They wanted to know the location where the entrance ceremony will be held. We couldn\'t communicate properly at first. >> We couldn\'t communicate well at first. OR >> We couldn\'t understand each other at first. Because I can\'t speak chinese and they can\'t speak korean. >> Because I can\'t speak Chinese and they can\'t speak Korean. (Chinese and Korean should be written in caiptal letters because it is a proper noun.)^^ Also, we both can\'t speak english well. >> Both of use can\'t speak in English well. But we came to understanding. >> But we were able to understand each other at the end. So I could help them after all. >> So I was able to help them after all.

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