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There is time that I feel depressed. When nothing is work out right or it is bad weather and so on. So in that case, I do what I like. I do my hobbies. I listen to music and I watch the comic movies and I play the paino and flute and I read the book . Also I meet my freinds to get rid of my stress. I keep doing these things, the negative feeling leave. I feel much better.

HI [이름] [이름]^^ Thank you for sending me a composition. I had fun reading it. Good job! You were able to expess yourself well. You just have to be careful with the spelling of the words. Meeting our friends is really helpful to get rid of our stress. I hope that you are going to have a wonderful day.Enjoy!See you tomorrow!Take Care! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: There is time that I feel depressed. >> There are times that I feel depressed. When nothing is work out right or it is bad weather and so on. >> When nothing is working out right or the weather is bad,So in that case, I do what I like. I do my hobbies. >> Correct!I listen to music and I watch the comic movies and I play the paino and flute and I read the book. >> I listen to music,I watch comic movies,I play the piano or flute and read some books. Also I meet my freinds to get rid of my stress. >> I also meet my freinds to get rid of my stress.I keep doing these things, the negative feeling leave. I feel much better. >> I keep on doing these things and the negative feelings are gone so I feel much better.