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1.It gets very cold on winter. 2.Betty doesn't have a job on the moment. 3.The telephone and the doorbell rang in the same time. 4.He flew from Japan.He probably in Perth now. 5.Would you like to go out to dinner at Friday night? My family members are very kind.My mom is helpful. She give me the study skill and she is know my heart,so I believe my mom. My dad is strong.My friends think my dad is bad dad,we look my dad,dad looks like very scary ,But he is very kind.He had fun with me.

Hi there my dear TOM^^ Happy Tuesday. You did a nice job with your homework. I had fun during our class. I am so glad about your composition.WOW! you\'re parents are really precious. I hope to meet them sometime.^^ I hope that your leg will get better.I am worried about you. Thank you for your time today. I am inspired to go to work because of you.Stay as you are TOM^^See you tomorrow!Take Care!Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.It gets very cold on winter. >>>It gets very cold in winter.2.Betty doesn\'t have a job on the moment. >>>Betty doesn\'t have a job at the moment.3.The telephone and the doorbell rang in the same time. >>>The telephone and the doorbell rang at the same time. 4.He flew from Japan.He probably in Perth now. >>>Correct! 5.Would you like to go out to dinner at Friday night?>>>Would you like to go out to dinner on Friday night? My family members are very kind. >>>Correct! My mom is helpful. >>>Correct! She give me the study skill and she is know my heart,so I believe my mom. >>>She helps me in my studies. She knows my heart so I believe my mom.My dad is strong. >>>Correct! My friends think my dad is bad dad,we look my dad,dad looks like very scary ,But he is very kind. >>>My friends think that my dad is not a good father. When we look at my dad, he looks very scary but he is very kind. He had fun with me. >>>Correct! >>>Or: We have fun together.