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I need many stuffs if I live alone in a desert island. I already enjoy living in city. I can't imagine that I can't use cell phone, computer, internet, and electricity forever. Especially I can't put up with alone. My boyfriend said If I live a desert island, I have to take him. If I can take somebody else, I want to take my boyfriend and my family. But maybe it can't. Then I will take something to live like food, seed, fishing, tent, ax and rope. Also I will take cute pet. Visiting desert island to rest is good, but living in desert island is bad.

Hi [이름], You are amazingly improving in your composition. I love it. Very well said and very well explained. See you in few minutes, T. Connie  I need many stuff if I live alone in a desert island. >> I need much stuff if I live alone in a desert island.  I already enjoy living in city. >> Correct I can't imagine that I can't use cell phone, computer, internet, and electricity forever. >> Correct Especially I can't put up with alone. >> Especially that I am not independent.  My boyfriend said if I live a desert island, I have to take him. >> Correct If I can take somebody else, I want to take my boyfriend and my family. >> Correct But maybe it can't. Then I will take something to live like food, seed, fishing, tent, ax and rope. >> but if I can’t I will take some things for my survival like food, seed, fishing, tent, ax and rope. Also I will take cute pet. Visiting desert island to rest is good, but living in desert island is bad. >> I will also take a cute pet. Visiting a desert island to take a rest is good but living in a desert island is bad.