Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q. Define this quotation: When you focus on problems, you gain more problems...when you focus on possibilities, you gain more opportunities.
A.
Actually... I don't know what is the exact answer of the question..
I guess that we don't have to worry too much about problems.
Worries can make more problems.
So We have to concentrate on getting more opportunities.
강사 첨삭
You have a very profound answer.
You actually go the right explanation.
Thumbs up! :)
I noticed that you capitalize the letter \"W\" in your compositon.
Please check my corrections and tell me in class what you notice.
See you later.
-T. WENDY
Actually... I don\'t know what is the exact answer of the question..
>> Actually, I don\'t know what the exact answer of the question is.
I guess that we don\'t have to worry too much about problems.
>> Correct Worries can make more problems.
>> Correct So We have to concentrate on getting more opportunities.
>> So we have to concentrate on getting more opportunities.
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