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2013-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

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Q. Define this quotation: When you focus on problems, you gain more problems...when you focus on possibilities, you gain more opportunities. A. Actually... I don't know what is the exact answer of the question.. I guess that we don't have to worry too much about problems. Worries can make more problems. So We have to concentrate on getting more opportunities.

강사 첨삭

You have a very profound answer. You actually go the right explanation. Thumbs up! :) I noticed that you capitalize the letter \"W\" in your compositon. Please check my corrections and tell me in class what you notice. See you later. -T. WENDY Actually... I don\'t know what is the exact answer of the question.. >>  Actually, I don\'t know what the exact answer of the question is. I guess that we don\'t have to worry too much about problems. >> Correct Worries can make more problems. >> Correct So We have to concentrate on getting more opportunities. >> So we have to concentrate on getting more opportunities.

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