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Why is it important to relax? :)
In my opinion, It's really important to relax and take a rest.
Because if I am really tired or feel nervous, I can't do anything properly.
When I'm tired, I try to take a rest and s[이름]p.
It make me feel better and I can work more effectly.
So I need to relax when I am tired.
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In my opinion, It\'s really important to relax and take a rest.
>> CorrectBecause if I am really tired or feel nervous, I can\'t do anything properly.
>> CorrectWhen I\'m tired, I try to take a rest and s[이름]p.
>> CorrectIt make me feel better and I can work more effectly.
>> It makes me feel better and I can work more effectively.So I need to relax when I am tired.
>> Correct
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