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2013-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

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Why is it important to relax? :) In my opinion, It's really important to relax and take a rest. Because if I am really tired or feel nervous, I can't do anything properly. When I'm tired, I try to take a rest and s[이름]p. It make me feel better and I can work more effectly. So I need to relax when I am tired.

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Hi there! I will really miss you. This is the last homework that you will receive from me. I hope you always remember all the things that I thought you. Here are your corrections. Take care! Your friend, T. Wendy In my opinion, It\'s really important to relax and take a rest. >> CorrectBecause if I am really tired or feel nervous, I can\'t do anything properly. >> CorrectWhen I\'m tired, I try to take a rest and s[이름]p. >> CorrectIt make me feel better and I can work more effectly. >> It makes me feel better and I can work more effectively.So I need to relax when I am tired. >>  Correct

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