homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
I was nice of you to talk about your wife. I guess you\'re very proud of her. I do believe that in every success of a man is a woman. So keep it up!!! I\'m very proud of you!!
T. Jeny
First of all, my parents are the most influential people in my life.
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They gave to enough love and attention that\'s the why I love them and thank them.
>>They gave enough love and attention that\'s why I lover and thank them.
I guess most people who have parents will choice their parents at first.
>>I guess most people who have parents will choose their parents first.
And my wife is too.
>>My my wife too.
She is alway smiling when she was tired.
>>She\'s always smiling when she is tired.
She gives to me encourge when I depressed.
>>She encourages me when I\'m depressed.
She is always praying for our family.
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She always speaks that we\'re happy and have to positism.
>>She always says that we need to be positive and be happy.
Those are helpful in my life.
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As a result, I have a mind that help for poor or disabled and positive is very strong.
>>As a result, I have a strong passion in caring for the poor or disabled.
People have to meet good people because of resembled each other.
>>People should meet people that resemble them.
People\'s word, action and mind will influenced each other.
>>People\'s word,action and mind will influence other people.
That\'s the main reason our parents want to meet good friends.
>>That\'s the main reason our parents want us to meet good friends.
We have a perborb that He who touches pitch shall be defiled therewith.
>>Whe have a proverb that says, \"he who touches pitch shall be defiled therewith.\"
I think that\'s true.
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