homework

2013-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

1.He hasn't done it yet,has he? 2.He's been to Italy twice,had he? 3.He's got a camera,hasn't he? 4.He's got a nice house, but he has't got a car,has he? 5.He hasn't got his time to talk,had he? part7. I have an another dream It is when I see animals,I will make a animals comicbook. Many kids will read that book,they will don't play smart phone and game,because my comicbook is very funny. Maybe they want to be become bilogist. Then my mind is nice ^^

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon! 

Thank you for doing your homework.
Great job!

Just go over my corrections for your practice.

Have a great day!

-Teacher Nina-

1.He hasn\'t done it yet,has he?

>> Correct.

2.He\'s been to Italy twice,had he?

>> hasn\'t he?

3.He\'s got a camera,hasn\'t he?

>> Correct.

4.He\'s got a nice house, but he has\'t got a car,has he?

>> Correct.

5.He hasn\'t got his time to talk,had he?
>> Correct.
part7.

 I have another dream

>> Correct.

It is when I see animals,I will make a animals comicbook.

>> When I see animals, I want to make an animal comic book.

Many kids will read that book,they will don\'t play smart phone and game,because my comicbook is very funny.

>> Many kids will read that book so they won\'t play with smart phones anymore because my comic book is very funny.

Maybe they want to be become bilogist.

>> Maybe they want to become a Biologist.

Then my mind is nice ^

>> Then I\'ll have a peaceful mind.

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