homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon!
Thank you for doing your homework.
Great job!
Just go over my corrections for your practice.
Have a great day!
-Teacher Nina-
1.He hasn\'t done it yet,has he?
>> Correct.
2.He\'s been to Italy twice,had he?
>> hasn\'t he?
3.He\'s got a camera,hasn\'t he?
>> Correct.
4.He\'s got a nice house, but he has\'t got a car,has he?
>> Correct.
>> Correct.
part7.
I have another dream
>> Correct.
It is when I see animals,I will make a animals comicbook.
>> When I see animals, I want to make an animal comic book.
Many kids will read that book,they will don\'t play smart phone and game,because my comicbook is very funny.
>> Many kids will read that book so they won\'t play with smart phones anymore because my comic book is very funny.
Maybe they want to be become bilogist.
>> Maybe they want to become a Biologist.
Then my mind is nice ^
>> Then I\'ll have a peaceful mind.
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