homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.Office
2.Supermarket
3.School
4.Police station
5.Hotel
Until now I talked about "My dream"and "My wish list"today.
I will try to do sixty percent and fourty percent of strive, and I will imagine my dream every day.
It is because having dream is help of that dream.
So I want to say I can do it!Thank you for listening^^
강사 첨삭
Hi my dear TOM^^
Congratulations! Got a perfect score! I think the homework was easy for you. You are right! You can do it! You just have to believe in yourself and strive harder.I know you can reach your dreams because you are a strong person.Just always keep an eye on your goal and be inspired in everything that you do. See you later in class!Take Care!
Teacher NIna
Here are my corrections for you:
1.Office
>> Correct!2.Supermarket
>> Correct!3.School
>> Correct!4.Police station
>> Correct!5.Hotel>> Correct!Until now I talked about \"My dream\"and \"My wish list\"today.
>> Until now I am taling about \"My dream and my wish liste\" today.I will try to do sixty percent and fourty percent of strive, and I will imagine my dream every day.
>> I will try to do sixty percent and strive for forty percent. I will imagine what my dream is everyday.It is because having dream is help of that dream.
>> Did you mean:It is because having a dream is helpful for me.
OR >> It is because thinking of my dream is helpful for me to reach it.So I want to say I can do it!Thank you for listening^^
>> Correct!
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