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Everyone wants to be rich that's the main reason people work hard but, normal salary men can't be rich. People who have an unique item might be rich when his business successes. But, most people who start his own business failed. Rich people say us that fortune is necessary for success and one of the reason they can be rich is a fortune. Mr.[이름]g, founder and former CEO of Hyundai group, 10 years ago died, told his autobiography that to be rich, people have to three important contents that passion, trust and fortune. I think so.

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