homework

2013-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

1) Have you painted the kitchen door? (to paint) 2) Has your brother done the shopping? (to do) 3) Has Julian ever touched a spider? (to touch) 4) Has your father ever riden on an elephant? (to ride) 6) What have you writen in your text? (to write) 7) Has Bill turned off the radio? (to turn off) 8) Have you ever flied in a helicopter? (to fly) 9) Who has the window broken? (to break) 10) Have you ever cooked for your friends? (to cook) Hi, Rowena. I'm glad to see you again in our class. Flankly, I forgot to check the re-enroll. I'm sorry our class was disconnected in a several days. But I promise I will enthusiastically join our class and if I have a free time, I can thoroughly prepare and review our text book. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to class with you and I believe we can do well and you can kindly revise my incorrect communication skills. Have a good day! Bye! See you later.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Eden! I\'m so haapy to see you again buddy! ^^ Thank you for those being so zealous for our class. Don\'t say sorry, I understand ,I\'m sure you were so busy during the past few days. I always enjoy the class with you. Please do check my corrections. Thank you so much for re-enrolling.^^ Take care. See you. T.Rowena     1) Have you painted the kitchen door? (to paint) >>correct 2) Has your brother done the shopping? (to do) >>correct3) Has Julian ever touched a spider? (to touch) >>correct4) Has your father ever riden on an elephant? (to ride) >>correct6) What have you writen in your text? (to write) >>correct // written //7) Has Bill turned off the radio? (to turn off) >>correct8) Have you ever flied in a helicopter? (to fly) >>Have you ever flown in a helicopter?  9) Who has the window broken? (to break) >>Who has broken the window?10) Have you ever cooked for your friends? (to cook)>>correctHi, Rowena. >>correctI\'m glad to see you again in our class. >>correctFlankly, I forgot to check the re-enroll. >>Frankly, I forgot to re-enroll.I\'m sorry our class was disconnected in a several days. >>correct! >> Better: I\'m sorry that we didn\'t have a class for several days.But I promise I will enthusiastically join our class and if I have a free time, >>correct! I can thoroughly prepare and review our text book.>>correct! Anyway, I\'m really looking forward to class with you andI believe we can do well and you can kindly revise my incorrect communication skills. >>Anyway, I\'m really looking forward about having the class with you andI believe we can do well and you can kindly check my incorrect communication skills. Have a good day! Bye! See you later. >>correct

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