homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.The knight looked dashing in his armour.
2.I have blond hair and blue eyes.
3.I don't even have one cent with me.
4.He said he knew where the place was.
5.An island is a piece of land surrounded by the sea.
Do you know Eastern brown?It is snake.
The Eastern brown has a poison.Yhe poison is very dangerous.
It bit a lot of people so many people was die from that snake.
I like that snake.
강사 첨삭
Hi TOM^^
I am scared of snakes. How about you? Congratulations! You did an amazing job! You got a perfect score again. I am so glad that you have a good range of vocabulary but don\'t sttp there.Learn more new words and use it in a sentence.^^ I know you can do it! Let\'s talk about that kind of snake later in class.See you!Have a good day!
Teacher Nina
Here are my corrections for you:
1.The knight looked dashing in his armour.
>> Correct!2.I have blond hair and blue eyes.
>> Correct!3.I don\'t even have one cent with me.
>> Correct!4.He said he knew where the place was.
>> Correct!5.An island is a piece of land surrounded by the sea.>> Correct!Do you know Eastern brown?
>> Correct!
It is snake.
>> It is a snake.The Eastern brown has a poison.
>> Correct!
Yhe poison is very dangerous.
>> The poison is very dangerous.It bit a lot of people so many people was die from that snake.
>> There were a lot of people died because they were bitten by that snake.I like that snake.
>> Correct!
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