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2013-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Rowena

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Q> How often do you talk with your mother? What are the things that you usually discuss with her? A > I have called on my mother everyday~ because my mother live alone~ so, i have called on my mother afther my work~ and i ask to my mother~ everything~ for example health, weather~ food~ so~ my mother said evertime~ " i'm ok! are you ok? " well~ we talked about everything and discussion we usually discuss to what have a food? ^.*

강사 첨삭

Hey there [이름]! I was smiling while I was reading your composition because I could see how much you love your mother and how she loves you back. You\'re a great child. Thanks for sharing this to me. I really like it. And please review my corrections below. Have a great day. Take care. T. Kristel ^^       Q> How often do you talk with your mother? What are the things that you usually discuss with her?A > I have called on my mother everyday~ because my mother live alone~ >> I call my mother everyday because my mother lives alone.so, i have called on my mother afther my work~ >> So, I always call my mother after work.and i ask to my mother~ everything~>> And I ask her everything.for example health, weather~ food~ >> For example, her health condition, the weather and food.so~ my mother said evertime~ \" i\'m ok! are you ok? \">> So, my mother always said, \" I\'m ok. \"  and \" Are you ok? \"well~ we talked about everything and discussion>>Well, we talk and discuss about everything.we usually discuss to what have a food? ^.* >> We usually talk about what food did we eat.

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