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HI~~!! 1. I'm writing this diary after lunch. I restart to lose weight. So i try to have a little lunch. but It was so delicious. So i ate a lot. I regreted and I took a walk for 15 minute. I'm still full. I must take a yoga class and do cycle machine. 2.I teach 4th,5th,6th grade student.My 6th grade student went to schooltrip fot 3day 2night.So i have no class today. It makes me happy and boring. 3.It is sunny. I make me feel good. it is nosiy ouside( at playground) and i am drinking coffee, listening to the music and writing this diary. It is really happy. 4. I am worried about my eyes. it doesn't have any pain. But I can not see well. It is stange. i can not concentrate on computer. If it is really big problem, how i do? So i do not want to go to the hospital. If it has a big problem, i do not wnat to know that.

Hello there!

Thanks for posting your diary here. You still have to go to the hospital for the doctors to check if what is the problem in your eyes and for you to be at ease and of course you will know what to do after.

Regarding your diary, you have expressed your thoughts very well. You just used a lot of \"SO\". Try to minimize the use of that expression. Don\'t forget also the proper capitalization, and punctuation. But nonetheless, you did very well. Good job. Hope to see you later!!

~~ T. Rowena

HI~~!!

>> Hi!
1. I\'m writing this diary after lunch.

>> CORRECT

I restart to lose weight.

>> DID YOU MEAN: I trying to lose weight.

So i try to have a little lunch. but It was so delicious.

>> I tried to eat a little at lunch but the food  was so delicious.

So i ate a lot. I regreted and I took a walk for 15 minute.

>> I ate a lot but I regretted  so I took a walk for 15 minutes. 

I\'m still full. I must take a yoga class and do cycle machine.
>> CORRECT
2.I teach 4th,5th,6th grade student.

>> I teach 4th, 5th and 6th grade students.

My 6th grade student went to schooltrip fot 3day 2night.

>> My 6th grade students went to a school trip for 3 days and 2 nights.

So i have no class today.

>> So I have no class today.

It makes me happy and boring.
>> It makes me happy and bored.
3.It is sunny.

>> CORRECT

 I make me feel good.

>> It makes me feel good.

it is nosiy ouside( at playground) and i am drinking coffee, listening to the music and writing this diary.

>> It is noisy outside, at the playground. I am drinking coffee, listening to music and writing this diary. 

It is really happy.
>> CORRECT
4. I am worried about my eyes. it doesn\'t have any pain. But I can not see well.

>> I am worried about my eyes. I don\'t feel any pain but I cannot see well.
It is stange. i can not concentrate on computer.

>> It is strange. I cannot concentrate on my computer.

If it is really big problem, how i do?

>> If it will be a big problem, what will I do?

So i do not want to go to the hospital.

>> I don\'t want to go to the hospital.

If it has a big problem, i do not wnat to know that.

>> If there will be a problem, I don\'t know what to do.