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2013-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.There was an airplane crash last night. 2.Did you enjoy watching the clown at the circus? 3.The grass around my house is turning green. 4.I collect stamps for a hobby. 5.What is the US dollar to British pound exchange rate. Teacher Nina! The spring is comming. The weather is become warmer. In Philippines,Are there spring? I want to go Philippines. I want to meet you ,too...^^

강사 첨삭

Hi my dearest TOM^^ A wonderful Thursday to you^^ Thank you for doing your homework. You did an awesome job! Congratulations! High five for that!We don\'t have spring season here in the Philippines because it is a tropical country.We only have two seasons.rainy and summer season.It\'s my pleasure to meet you in person Tom.^^ I hope you will be able to visit the Philippines someday.Please go over the corrections I provided for you.See you later in class!Take Care! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.There was an airplane crash last night. >> Correct!2.Did you enjoy watching the clown at the circus? >> Correct!3.The grass around my house is turning green. >> Correct!4.I collect stamps for a hobby. >> Correct!5.What is the US dollar to British pound exchange rate. >> Correct!Teacher Nina! >> Correct!The spring is comming. >> The spring is coming. (Be careful with the spelling of the work coming.)^^ OR >> The spring season is approaching.The weather is become warmer. >> The weather is becoming warmer.In Philippines,Are there spring? >> Is there a spring season in the Philippines? OR >> Do you have spring season in the Philippines?I want to go Philippines. >> I want to go to the Philippines.I want to meet you ,too...^^ >> Correct

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