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- Why is Math important?
Math is important because we can use math to choose clothes. We also can use math to calculate moneys. And we can use math to answer the shape of thing.
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~ T. Camille
~ T. Camille
- Why is Math important?
Math is important because we can use math to choose clothes.
Math is important because we can use math to choose clothes.
>> CORRECT!
We also can use math to calculate moneys.
>> We also can use math to calculate money.
And we can use math to answer the shape of thing.
>> And we can use math to answer the shape of a thing.
OR >> We also can use math to calculate money, and we can use math to answer the shape of a thing.
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