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2013-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.Tom is still at the hospital with serious injuries. 2.Sally is in the garden. 3.She is in the bus stop waiting for a bus. 4.The headline is in the top of the page. 5.The boys are playing football in the street. Do you like a chocolate? The chocolate is delicious. There are many kinds of chocolate at the chocolate shop. I love chocolate! How about you?

강사 첨삭

Hi my dear TOM^^ HAPPY FRIDAY TOM!I love chocolates too.^^ What is your favorite brand of chocolate? How often do you eat chocolates? I think you need to work more on your prepositions.Don\'t worry I will explain the homework during the class.Can\'t wait to talk to you.^^ See you!Take Care! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.Tom is still at the hospital with serious injuries. >> in 2.Sally is in the garden. >> Correct!3.She is in the bus stop waiting for a bus. >> at 4.The headline is in the top of the page. >> at 5.The boys are playing football in the street. >> Correct!Do you like a chocolate? >> Do you like chocolates?The chocolate is delicious. >> Chocolate is delicious.There are many kinds of chocolate at the chocolate shop. >> There are a lot of kinds of chocolates at the shop.I love chocolate! How about you? >> Correct!

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