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2013-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Q> What is the best characteristic of your bestfriend that you admire the most? A> Hum~~~characteristic I have no idea~ but i have to know~~ my friend is very a domestic and often help to his wife for example do the dish, gather in wash~ so i'm angry~sometimes~ because~~ his wife usually said to my wife~ "my husband~usually help me~~~ ㅜ.ㅜ but, i admire this point~

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Hello there Sir [이름]!! A pleasant Monday morning.... ^^ I understand why sometimes you get upset about it. That\'s because you hate it when  your wife starts to compare you with your friend, right???kkk Well, it\'s a natural thing so just get used to it. You\'re a good husband in your own way too...kkk Just let your wife feel that and things will be okay! Anyway sir, please check the corrections I made for you. Have a nice day! T.Kristel HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Q> What is the best characteristic of your bestfriend that you admire the most?A> Hum~~~characteristic >>CORRECT!!I have no idea~ but i have to know~~ >>CORRECT!! But I know that I have to find one~~~my friend is very a domestic and often help to his wife >> my friend is very domestic and often helps his wifefor example do the dish, gather in wash~ >> for example doing the dishes, doing the laundries and others~so i\'m angry~sometimes~ >> but sometimes it makes me feel annoyed~ because~~ his wife usually said to my wife~ >> because his wife usually tells my wife~\"my husband~usually help me~~~ ㅜ.ㅜ >> \"my husband~usually helps me~~~ ㅜ.ㅜbut, i admire this point~ >>CORRECT!!>>But I admire this the most.

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