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As far as I consider, my greatest accomplishment is studying Psychology. Because of it, I can understand human being and me, and dream of being the specialist for training. With the interests about HR, I worked as HR consult for a while. Also, I keep on trying to my best untill I achive my goal.
강사 첨삭
Good evening.
Wow!
You have great dreams!It\'s good that you\'re doing your best to achieve your goals.
Keep on doing your best and before you\'ll know it, your goal will be within your reach.
Enjoy your evening.
I\'ll see you tomorrow!
~T. Aimee^^
As far as I consider, my greatest accomplishment is studying Psychology.
>>>Correct!
>>>Or: As far as I know, my greatest accomplishment is studying Psychology.
Because of it, I can understand human being and me, and dream of being the specialist for training.
>>>Because of it, I can understand myself, and other human beings. Also, I now dream of becoming a training specialist.
With the interests about HR, I worked as HR consult for a while.
>>>Because of my interest in HR, I worked as an HR consultant for a while.
Also, I keep on trying to my best untill I achive my goal.
>>>Also, I keep on doing my best until I achieve my goal.
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