homework:)

2013-04-09 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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1. She has one brown eye and one blue one. Her lips are like rubies. Which word is an adjective? :a-brown a. brown b. rubies c. lips 2. Pour the wine gravy over the beef but not the potatoes. Which word is an adjective? :b-wine a. wine b. gravy c. pour 3. The park is by a smelly old river near the windmill. Which word is an adjective? :a-smelly a. smelly b. windmill c. river 4. Bounce the red ball twice and the white one once. Which word is an adjective? :c-withe a. bounce b. one c. white 5. This coffee is disgusting. Are you the store manager? Which word is an adjective? :c-This a. manager b. is c. This Hello~Teacher Verna:) I'm sorry I can't take your phone callㅠㅠ actually, nowadays I was tired beacause of my work.ㅠ So I stayed up all day yesterday. and I slept at 7:00am. then I can't hear the ring bellㅠㅠ I was in a deep sleep I'm sorry~ I'll see you tommorrow and let's talk on the phone~ have a good evening:) byebye~

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thank you for doing a great job in answering your homework! ^^ It is so sad to know that you are exhausted these days. Let\'s talk more about how you are feeling in class. See you! -- T. Verna --   1. She has one brown eye and one blue one. Her lips are like rubies. Which word is an adjective?:a-brown>> Correct!a. brown b. rubies c. lips2. Pour the wine gravy over the beef but not the potatoes. Which word is an adjective?:b-wine>> Correct!a. wine b. gravy c. pour3. The park is by a smelly old river near the windmill. Which word is an adjective?:a-smelly>> Correct!a. smelly b. windmill c. river4. Bounce the red ball twice and the white one once. Which word is an adjective? :c-withe>> Correct!a. bounce b. one c. white5. This coffee is disgusting. Are you the store manager? Which word is an adjective?:c-This >> Correct! a. manager b. is c. ThisHello~Teacher Verna:) >> Correct!I\'m sorry I can\'t take your phone callㅠㅠ >> I\'m sorry I couldn\'t take your call ㅠㅠ actually, nowadays I was tired beacause of my work.ㅠ >>  Actually, I am tired nowadays because of my work.ㅠSo I stayed up all day yesterday. and I slept at 7:00am.>> So I stayed up all night yesterday and I slept at 7 am. then I can\'t hear the ring bellㅠㅠ >> That is why I couldn\'t hear the phone ring. ㅠㅠ I was in a deep sleep >>  Correct!I\'m sorry~ >> Correct!I\'ll see you tommorrow and let\'s talk on the phone~ >> Correct!have a good evening:) >> Correct!byebye~  

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