homework~

2013-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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Q> Describe your dream house. How many rooms do you want it to have? A> Well~~ my dream house is an small apartment and there is three room~ and two bathroom~~ however, there is a mountain~ gym~ big market~ a park near my apartment if i were to live someone~ it will be my wife~ so~ i will be happy if we are together~ it will be a small house~~

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Hello there Sir [이름]!! A pleasant afternoon~~ Wow!! You were sweet in this homework...kkk You must really miss your wife now..kkk Anyway, pelase check the corrections! Thanks! Have a nice day and see you! T.Kristel Q> Describe your dream house. How many rooms do you want it to have?A> Well~~ my dream house is an small apartment and there is three room~and two bathroom~~ >> Well, my dream house is a small apartment with three rooms and two bathrooms~~ however, there is a mountain~ gym~ big market~ a park near my apartment >> Moreover, I hope that there would be a mountain, a gym, a supermarket and a park near my apartmentif i were to live someone~ it will be my wife~ >> if i were to live with someone~ it will be my wife~so~ i will be happy if we are together~ it will be a small house~~ >> I am certain that I will be happy if we are together even if it will be just a small house~~

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