Homework 29

2016-08-09 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Would you like to be different? Why or why not? Give some examples... Of course, i tend to be different against others. if we have same appearance and ability, may seems to stupid. because there are not exist a subjectivity. Also if one person do anythings in the group, the others following the activity. the group would not grow in society. i think that the society have developed because of difference. So we have to pursue to be different to grow creativity.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear Sun!How are you today? I hope you to have a great dau despite the very hot weather. Anyway great job today!I hope you will keep up the good work... Call you again tomorrow... Take care and have a great day! xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Would you like to be different? Why or why not?Give some examples...Of course, i tend to be different against others. >>correct if we have same appearance and ability, may seems to stupid. >>It seems stupid to have the same appearance and ability with other people. because there are not exist a subjectivity.>>Because everyone is unique.Also if one person do anythings in the group, the others following the activity. >>If someone happens to do something in the group, the others will follow them.the group would not grow in society. >>The group will not grow in society. i think that the society have developed because of difference. >>I tink our society has developed because of differences.So we have to pursue to be different to grow creativity. >>So we have to pursue our difference for our creativity.

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