Homework 29
학생이 쓴 원문
Would you like to be different? Why or why not?
Give some examples...
Of course, i tend to be different against others. if we have same appearance and ability, may seems to stupid. because there are not exist a subjectivity.
Also if one person do anythings in the group, the others following the activity.
the group would not grow in society. i think that the society have developed because of difference.
So we have to pursue to be different to grow creativity.
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear Sun!How are you today? I hope you to have a great dau despite the very hot weather.
Anyway great job today!I hope you will keep up the good work...
Call you again tomorrow...
Take care and have a great day!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Would you like to be different? Why or why not?Give some examples...Of course, i tend to be different against others.
>>correct
if we have same appearance and ability, may seems to stupid.
>>It seems stupid to have the same appearance and ability with other people.
because there are not exist a subjectivity.>>Because everyone is unique.Also if one person do anythings in the group, the others following the activity.
>>If someone happens to do something in the group, the others will follow them.the group would not grow in society.
>>The group will not grow in society.
i think that the society have developed because of difference. >>I tink our society has developed because of differences.So we have to pursue to be different to grow creativity.
>>So we have to pursue our difference for our creativity.
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