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2013-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.Why did he go away on his word? 2.I don't think you should go to a job in that company 3.Time goes in quickly ,my dear 4.The price of gas did not go off as we expected 5.My complaint goes for you ,too Finally tomorrow,I will go to Yeo-Su I think very exciting. Before that I went to Yeo-Su But in spring I did't go there,but I'm sad It is because I won't see you.I will miss your voice and face. See you on Monday^^

강사 첨삭

HI MY DEAR TOM^^ HAPPY THURSDAY!! Today is our last meeting for this week. I am so happy that you are going to have a wonderful time with your family tomorrow.Don\'t be sad we will still see each other on Monday. I will miss you too. You are really sweet.Enjoy your time with your family tomorrow and on the weekend.I know that you will be really happy.See you later in class.Take Care!Please go over the corrections I gave you.If you have any questions,just ask me during our class. Teahcer Nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.Why did he go away on his word? >> back 2.I don\'t think you should go to a job in that company >> agter 3.Time goes in quickly ,my dear >> by 4.The price of gas did not go off as we expected >> down 5.My complaint goes for you ,too>> Correct!Finally tomorrow,I will go to Yeo-Su >> Correct! (Don\'t forget the punctuation mark period (.)after your sentence.)I think very exciting. Before that I went to Yeo-Su >> I feel excited to go to Yeo-su. OR >> I think it is exciting to go to Yeo-su.But in spring I did\'t go there,but I\'m sad >> I didn\'t go there last spring and I\'m sad.It is because I won\'t see you.I will miss your voice and face. >> Correct!See you on Monday^^ >> Correct!

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