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Unfortunately, we have not famous park like central park or others but, Seoul citizens can always go to Han river park easily. Maybe it's about 30km so if you go to there, you can play many activities with your family and friedns such as take a rest in grassland, eat the food, ride inline skating, bicycle and jogging. Especially, that place is very complicated in summer season becuase we can cool off there. In contrast,when winter season is almost empty because of cold. As you know, river or sea winter blast is very strong. People can camping in there but, they can just use their small tent. As you know, Seoul is ranked the biggest, complicated, fast city in the world so, most Seoul citizens love Han river park because it's near and take a rest very comfortably.

Hi there!!! ^^ Wow! That was an amazing composition. I appreciate you telling me something about the Han River Park. It sounds that that place is a very good destination for tourists. Anyway, keep on improving. Have a great evening ahead. ^^ Teacher Jeny ^_^   Unfortunately, we have not famous park like central park or others but, Seoul citizens can always go to Han river park easily. >> Unfortunately, we don\'t have very famous park like the central park. But the people living in Seoul can always go to Han river park easily. Maybe it\'s about 30km so if you go to there, you can play many activities with your family and friedns such as take a rest in grassland, eat the food, ride inline skating, bicycle and jogging. >> Maybe it\'s about 30km. So if you go there, you can do many activities with your family and friends. Such as taking a rest at the grass, eat food, ride inline skating, cycling and jogging. Especially, that place is very complicated in summer season becuase we can cool off there. >> That place is very congested during summer because we can cool off there.   In contrast,when winter season is almost empty because of cold. >> In contrary, that place is almost empty during winter because it\'s very cold. As you know, river or sea winter blast is very strong. >> As you know, the river or the sea winter blast is very strong. People can camping in there but, they can just use their small tent. >> People can do camping there but they can just use small tents. As you know, Seoul is ranked the biggest, complicated, fast city in the world so, most Seoul citizens love Han river park because it\'s near and take a rest very comfortably. >> As you know, Seoul is ranked as the biggest, complicated and fast city in the world. That\'s why most people living in Seoul loves Han River Park because it\'s near and you can take a very comfortable rest there.