homework
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강사 첨삭
An exciting Friday to both of us.
I hope you have started the day right.
Thank you for making and sending in your composition.
Anyways, please review your assignment during your free time.
I\'ll see you in class.^^
Take care.
_T. Ronnie_
Hi John,
>> CORRECT!!
I arrived in X USA last Monday.
>> I arrived in THE USA last Monday.
We left X Rome, flew over X Alps and made a quick stop in X London.
>>We left X Rome, flew over THE Alps and made a quick stop in X London.
There we went shopping in X Harrods, visited the Tower and enjoyed a sunny afternoon in X Hyde Park.
>>There we went shopping in X Harrods, visited THE Tower and enjoyed a sunny afternoon in X Hyde Park
On the following day we left for X New York.
>>Correct!
The time on board wasn\'t boring as there were two films to watch on the monitor.
>>Correct!
The people on the plane were all X Italian. Before we landed at the JFK airport, we saw the Statue of Liberty, the Ellis Island and the Empire State Building.
>>THE people on the plane were all X Italian. Before we landed at X JFK airport, we saw THE Statue of Liberty, X Ellis Island and THE Empire State Building.
The hotel I stayed in was on the corner of the 42nd Street and the 5th Avenue.
>>THE hotel I stayed in was on the corner of X 42nd Street and X 5th Avenue.
I don\'t like the hotels very much, but I didn\'t have the time to rent an apartment.
>>
I don\'t like X hotels very much, but I didn\'t have X time to rent an apartment.
Please say hello to Peter and Mandy.
>> CORRECT!!
Yours,
Peter
>> CORRECT!!
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