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2013-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

I'll write some differnt subject. Since 1990's, IT technology has much advanced so, we can learn from whoever and from everywhere. Let me explain. Edx ,online-education program, provides their contents for free. If you join Edx, you can study by yourself to using computer or iPad. You don't worry about it's quality because most of professors are really famous and they actually teach in Harvard and MIT. The most advantages are free and comfortable so, it's not necessary to go to there. Of course, it's not regular course, but you can experience that Harvard and MIT cultures. If you look around your side, you can find so many ways that in order to get knowledge. Money and teacher is not essential for your study. Just find and take. World is very large.

강사 첨삭

Good Evening [이름], Thank you very much for you composition. I agree that there are many ways to learn new things and it always depend on the person on how persistent he /she is in acquiring knowledge. I am sure you are well provided with informations so learning for you is much easy. Have fun always! T. Jeny  I\'ll write some differnt subject. Since 1990\'s, IT technology has much advanced so, we can learn from whoever and from everywhere. >>I will write something about some subjects. Since 1990\'s IT technology has advanced drastically and we can learn from these anytime, anywhere. Let me explain. >> Correct! Edx ,online-education program, provides their contents for free. >> Correct! If you join Edx, you can study by yourself to using computer or iPad. >> If you join Edx, you can study by yourself by using computer or iPad. You don\'t worry about it\'s quality because most of professors are really famous and they actually teach in Harvard and MIT. >> You don\'t need worry about it\'s quality because most of professors are really famous and they actually teach in Harvard and MIT. The most advantages are free and comfortable so, it\'s not necessary to go to there. >> The best advantages are free and comfortable so, it\'s not necessary to go to there. Of course, it\'s not regular course, but you can experience that Harvard and MIT cultures. >> Of course, it\'s not a regular class but you can experience Harvard and MIT cultures.If you look around your side, you can find so many ways that in order to get knowledge. >> If you look around your side, you can find many ways in order to acquire knowledge. Money and teacher is not essential for your study. >> Correct! Just find and take. >> Correct! World is very large. >> Correct!  

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