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Do you agree with Cosmetic surgery? I used to think the cosmetic surgery so strange and cynical. But my point of view has been changed for a long time. Maybe, it seems that I could be quite affected by mass media. Whenever I turn on the TV these day, I can easily see many entertainers undergoing cosmetic surgery. Of course, I understand thier feelings to be handsome and beautiful. Frankly speaking, I think everyone may get cosmetic surgery if it can be not much. Sometimes, It can be useful from a different view. For example, it will help the person who has the wound on the face to recover his or her confidence for various reasons. In conclusion, I think the cosmetic surgery can go a head and we have to try to see it from varous points of view.

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Do you agree with Cosmetic surgery?
I used to think the cosmetic surgery so strange and cynical.

>>I used to think that cosmetic surgery was strange and cynical.
But my point of view has been changed for a long time.

>>But for the longest time, my point of view have changed.
Maybe, it seems that I could be quite affected by mass media.

>>Maybe because I was already convinced by media.
Whenever I turn on the TV these day, I can easily see many entertainers undergoing cosmetic surgery.

>>Whenever I turn on the TV these days, I can easily see many entertainers undergoing cosmetic surgery.
Of course, I understand thier feelings to be handsome and beautiful.

>>Of course, I understand their need to be beautiful and handsome because of their profession.
Frankly speaking, I think everyone may get cosmetic surgery if it can be not much.

>>To tell you frankly, I think everyone may get cosmetic surgery if it doesn\'t cost too much.
Sometimes, It can be useful from a different view.

>>CORRECT!!
For example, it will help the person who has the wound on the face to recover his or her confidence for various reasons.

>>For example, it will help a person gain confidence by treating a wound or scar on the face.
In conclusion, I think the cosmetic surgery can go a head and we have to try to see it from varous points of view.

>>In conclusion, I think cosmetic surgery is not that really bad depending on the use and the situation.