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2013-04-16 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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Hello Rewena. I think it mihgt be the Spring because I could feel warm. Time pass by fast. Homework: I think that it is not bad to do comestic surgery, but of course it must not be abused. It bring confidence to someone that have troubles such as scars and irregular teeth and so on.So I agree with a cosmetic surgery to a certain. Have a good day~!

강사 첨삭

Hello there!! Happy Tuesday morning.^^

I hope everything is doing fine.

Thank you for making and sending your composition.

You really did well.

I also agree with your opinion that cosmetic surgery is not all that bad as long as you don\'t abuse it.

But anyway, I have corrected your essay and please try to review it during you free time.

I will see you again in class.

Please take care.

_T. Rowena^^

Hello Rewena. I think it mihgt be the Spring because I could feel warm. Time pass by fast.
>>Hello Rowena! I think it might be the Spring season because I can feel the warm weather. Time passes by so fast.
Homework:

I think that it is not bad to do comestic surgery, but of course it must not be abused.

>>CORRECT!! or I think cosmetic surgery is not bad as long as you don\'t abuse it.

It bring confidence to someone that have troubles such as scars and irregular teeth and so on.

>>It brings confidence to someone who has troubles such as scars and irregular teeth.

So I agree with a cosmetic surgery to a certain.
>>So I agree with cosmetic surgery to a certain level.

Have a good day~!

>>CORRECT!!

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