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Hello there!! Happy Tuesday morning.^^
I hope everything is doing fine.
Thank you for making and sending your composition.
You really did well.
I also agree with your opinion that cosmetic surgery is not all that bad as long as you don\'t abuse it.
But anyway, I have corrected your essay and please try to review it during you free time.
I will see you again in class.
Please take care.
_T. Rowena^^
Hello Rewena. I think it mihgt be the Spring because I could feel warm. Time pass by fast.
>>Hello Rowena! I think it might be the Spring season because I can feel the warm weather. Time passes by so fast.
Homework:
I think that it is not bad to do comestic surgery, but of course it must not be abused.
>>CORRECT!! or I think cosmetic surgery is not bad as long as you don\'t abuse it.
It bring confidence to someone that have troubles such as scars and irregular teeth and so on.
>>It brings confidence to someone who has troubles such as scars and irregular teeth.
So I agree with a cosmetic surgery to a certain.
>>So I agree with cosmetic surgery to a certain level.
Have a good day~!
>>CORRECT!!
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