HOMEWORK:
학생이 쓴 원문
Use the idiom "burn your bridges"
If you encounter to a difficult situation, buring your bridges could be a good idea.
It makes you focus on solving the problem and prevent you from running away from the problem.
I've done some writtings
Koreans memorized its 25th years of bloody uprising for former military government in 1980. During the event, there was a clash between protestor and police and soliders causing at least 150 casualties. Current president Roh said the uprising made a part of today's democracy in Korea.
In America, Many people frantic with 'Star Wars' new episode made long lines in front of a theater's ticket box. As a result, seats were all taken, and many people came to the theater with costums of Star Wars. On its first run, it made a record high 16 million dollars. Compare to this, the last installment of The lord of the ring made half of Star Wars' on its first run. Ticket sales, on a first day of debut, expected to be about 40 milion dollars.
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If you encounter to a difficult situation, buring your bridges could be a good idea.
>> If you encounter a difficult situation, buring your bridges could be a good idea.It makes you focus on solving the problem and prevent you from running away from the problem.>> CorrectI\'ve done some writtings>> I did some writings.Koreans memorized its 25th years of bloody uprising for former military government in 1980.
>> Koreans memorized its 25th year of bloody uprising for the former military government in 1980.
During the event, there was a clash between protestor and police and soliders causing at least 150 casualties.
>> During the event, there was a clash between the protestor , the police and the soliders causing at least 150 casualties.
Current president Roh said the uprising made a part of today\'s democracy in Korea.>> Current president Roh said that the uprising made a part of today\'s democracy in Korea.In America, Many people frantic with \'Star Wars\' new episode made long lines in front of a theater\'s ticket box.
>> In America, Many people frantic with the \'Star Wars\' new episode made long lines in front of a theater\'s ticket box.
As a result, seats were all taken, and many people came to the theater with costums of Star Wars.
>> As a result, seats were all taken, and many people came to the theater with costumes of Star Wars.
On its first run, it made a record high 16 million dollars.
>> On its first run, it made a record high with 16 million dollars.
Compare to this, the last installment of The lord of the ring made half of Star Wars\' on its first run.
>> Compared to this, the last installment of \"The lord of the rings\" made half of \"Star Wars\" on its first run.
Ticket sales, on a first day of debut, expected to be about 40 milion dollars.
>> Ticket sales on a first debut is expected to be about 40 milion dollars.
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