Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there Sir Iron!
Good evening!
I hope that you\'re not having an overtime tonight. :)
Anyway, please review the corrections below.
I know that this is somewhat difficult because the choices are very confusing.
If you have any questions, you can ask me about it anytime. :)
Enjoy the rest of your evening!
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~~T. Heidi _^-^_
(All / All of(O)) the witches gathered near the cave entrance.
>>>All the witches gathered near the cave entrance.
\"Is this (all / all of(O)) us?\", cackled Prefect Witch Gillian as she wandered through the crowd.
>>>Correct!
After a few minutes, Gillian turned to the Grand Witch, who was dressed from head to toe in a dark red gown,
and shrieked: \"Your Grandness, (All / All of(O)) the coven are present.
>>>
After a few minutes, Gillian turned to the Grand Witch, who was dressed from head to toe in a dark red gown,
and shrieked: \"Your Grandness, (All / All of(O)) the coven are present.
\" The Grand Witch stared across the crowd. (All / All of(O)) them fell silent immediately.
>>>Correct!
Raising her thin shepherd\'s crook into the air, she spoke firmly: \"Witches of Carson, as you are aware, this weekend, (all / all of(O)) the children are sailing to Orion Island.
>>> Raising her thin shepherd\'s crook into the air, she spoke firmly: \"Witches of Carson, as you are aware, this weekend, all the children are sailing to Orion Island.
\" The onlookers broke into fits of giggles and rib poking. The Grand Witch smirked and patted the air in front of her in a calming gesture. \"Can I have some quiet please? (All right / Alright(O)), quiet. I know you\'re excited\", she cackled.
>>>All right, quiet.
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