homework

I respect my mom mostly. When I was a child, I didn't know that my mom is such a great person. But as time goes by, I was able to realise mom's worth. Although having worries, she always tries to smile herself and make people laugh through her joke. She has deep patience, positive mind. I really admire and love her therefore I want to be a person like her in the future.

Hi my dearest [이름]^^ I am sure that you really love your mom. She is really fortunate to have you as her daughter. I know that you will be like her.Thank you for your essay.^^ You were able to explain your thoughts well.^^ FANTASTIC! I am looking foward to talk to you tomorrow! See you!Have a great night!Sweet dreams. Teacher NIna Here are my corrections for you: I respect my mom mostly. >> I repect my mom the most.When I was a child, I didn\'t know that my mom is such a great person. >> Correct! But as time goes by, I was able to realise mom\'s worth. >> But as time goes by, I was able to realize my mom\'s worth. Although having worries, she always tries to smile herself and make people laugh through her joke. >> Although she has a lot of worries,she always tries to smile and make other people laugh with her jokes. She has deep patience, positive mind. >> She is really aptient and she has a positive mind. I really admire and love her therefore I want to be a person like her in the future. >> Correct!