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2013-04-19 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.Does 2.Do 3.Does 4.Do 5.Does "Talent is don't mistake" It is my mother's philosopy about the study. But I made a mistake.I want to change my syudy mryiculous.^^

강사 첨삭

Hi my dear TOM^^ HAPPY FRIDAY^^ I think your mom\'s philosophy is really good. You should not be depressed or sad when you commit mistakes, take it as a challenge.You should be inspired whenever you had a mistake and strive harder.Don\'t worry I am always here to guide you,okay? I hope that you had a nice day.Please go over the corrections I gave you.See you later in class! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.Does >> Correct!2.Do >> Correct!3.Does >> Do4.Do >> Correct!5.Does>> Correct!\"Talent is don\'t mistake\" >> Talent is when you don\'t commit a mistake. It is my mother\'s philosopy about the study. >> It is my mother\'s philosophy about education. But I made a mistake. >> Correct! I want to change my syudy mryiculous.^^ >> Did you mean: I want to miraculously change my study habits. OR >> I want to have a miracle regarding my study habits.

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