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2013-04-22 · 첨삭 강사 wendy

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What is your greatest fear and why? I have a thing with a bee. That's beacuse i got stung by a bee when i wan young. The bee stung my neck, and it was around my neck and i thought it was a vital part of my body after i realized it wasn't. So, at that time i thought i could've died by a bee. So after that incident, i always run away whenever i hit a bee with fear of death. And now although i know a samll bee cannot kill me, i' am still afraid of it, it sounds pretty ridiculous but i think it's because of a traum from my childwood experience.

강사 첨삭

Hi there. Wow. I am also scared of bees. I think it looks scary. Here are the corrections to your homework. See you soon! -T. WENDY I have a thing with a bee. >> Correct >>> I have a thing with bees. That\'s beacuse i got stung by a bee when i wan young. >> That\'s because I got stung by a bee when i was young.The bee stung my neck, and it was around my neck and i thought it was a vital part of my body after i realized it wasn\'t. >> The bee stung my neck. It was around my neck and I thought it was a vital part of my body after i realized it wasn\'t. So, at that time i thought i could\'ve died by a bee. >> So, at that time I thought I could\'ve been killed by a bee. So after that incident, i always run away whenever i hit a bee with fear of death. >> So after that incident, I always run away whenever I see a bee with the fear of death. And now although i know a samll bee cannot kill me, i\' am still afraid of it, it sounds pretty ridiculous but i think it\'s because of a traum from my childwood experience. >> And now although I know a small bee cannot kill me, I\'m still afraid of it. It sounds pretty ridiculous but i think it\'s because of a trauma from my childhood experience.

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