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2013-04-22 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

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1. She whined, 'No, anything but water.' She whined: 'No, anything but water.'(o) 2. Do me a favour, Tommy. (o) Do me a favour Tommy. 3. Therefore the bridge is more vulnerable in winter. Therefore, the bridge is more vulnerable in winter.(o) 4. The band will start up at 4 o'clock on Wednesday.(o) The band will start up, at 4 o'clock on Wednesday. 5. She must be able to sing and she must be able to dance.(o) She must be able to sing, and she must be able to dance. 6. 123,446,016.72(o) 123446,0016.72 7. Mark as it happens, will be available from midnight. Mark, as it happens, will be available from midnight.(o) 8. Take the show to Leeds, Newcastle and Sunderland.(o) Take the show to Leeds, Newcastle, and Sunderland. 9. After 30 minutes take the cake out of the oven. After 30 minutes, take the cake out of the oven.(o)

강사 첨삭

Good evening Sir Iron! ^^ Good job on this homework too! ^^ You were only able to miss two correct answers. Anyway, if you have any questions at all, you can just bring it up during our conversation. See yah in a few minutes! ~~T. Heidi _^-^_ 1.She whined, \'No, anything but water.\'She whined: \'No, anything but water.\'(o)>>>She whined, \'No, anything but water.\'2. Do me a favour, Tommy. (o)Do me a favour Tommy.>>>Correct!3. Therefore the bridge is more vulnerable in winter.Therefore, the bridge is more vulnerable in winter.(o)>>>Correct!4. The band will start up at 4 o\'clock on Wednesday.(o)The band will start up, at 4 o\'clock on Wednesday.>>>Correct!5. She must be able to sing and she must be able to dance.(o)She must be able to sing, and she must be able to dance.>>>She must be able to sing, and she must be able to dance.6. 123,446,016.72(o) 123446,0016.72>>>Correct!7. Mark as it happens, will be available from midnight.Mark, as it happens, will be available from midnight.(o)>>>Correct!8. Take the show to Leeds, Newcastle and Sunderland.(o)Take the show to Leeds, Newcastle, and Sunderland.>>>Correct!9. After 30 minutes take the cake out of the oven.After 30 minutes, take the cake out of the oven.(o) >>>Correct!

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