homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.She often writes a letter.
2.They always play handball in the evening.
3.He can visit his uncle in Berlin.
4.We had not lunch at school yesterday.
5.I did not my homework in my room.
I get up at 6;30A.M
I study from 8;30A.M to 2;30P.M in school
I play the piano from 2;30P.M to 3;30P.M
I study math,English,korean,science and social studies from 5P.M to 7P.M
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear TOM^^
HAPPY MONDAY! How was your weekend? I hope that you had a great time like me. Nice job with your homework. Tell me a lot of stories about your day later in class. I am so excited to talk to you again. Please go over the corrections I gave you and If you have some questions raise it in class. Good job! You are really studying hard.Keep it up! I know that you are going to have good grades in school because of your study habits.See you!Take Care!
Teacher Nina
Here are my corrections for you:
1.She often writes a letter.
>> Correct!2.They always play handball in the evening.
>> Correct!3.He can visit his uncle in Berlin.
>> Correct!4.We had not lunch at school yesterday.
>> We did not have lunch at school yesterday.5.I did not my homework in my room.
>> I did not do my homework in my room.I get up at 6;30A.M
>> Correct!
OR >> I get up at six thirty in the morning.I study from 8;30A.M to 2;30P.M in school
>> Correct!
OR >> I study from 8:30 A.M. to 2:30P.M. in schoolI play the piano from 2;30P.M to 3;30P.M
>> Correct!
OR >> I play the piano from 2:30 P.M. to 3:30 P.M. (Be careful with your punctuation marks.)I study math,English,korean,science and social studies from 5P.M to 7P.M
>> I study Math,English,Korean,Science and Social studies from 5 P.M to 7 P.M
OR >> I study Math,English,Korean,Science and Socia studies from five o\'clock to seven o\'clock in the evening.
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