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학생이 쓴 원문
Many students like this sentense and you can see easily in school. Many workers were told by seniors when you have some difficult during working. Yes, many koreans tell and listen that never give up. We have seen sucessful people who overcame hardship and finally they sucessed. They told us that never give up and try to hard more after that, you can be sucessful. That's true if you can't give up, you'll acheive your goals sometime. You should have patience.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!!! ^^
I apprecaite you sharing your opinion about the said statement.
I hope you won\'t give up in learning the English language
because for sure you will improve a lot.
Have a great evening ahead. ^^
Teacher Jeny ^_^
Many students like this sentense and you can see easily in school.
>> A lot of students likes this sentences and you can easily see it at school.
Many workers were told by seniors when you have some difficult during working. >> Many workers are told by seniors this sentence when they have some difficulty at work.
Yes, many koreans tell and listen that never give up.
>> Yes, many Koreans say and could hear the statement, \"never give up. \"
We have seen sucessful people who overcame hardship and finally they sucessed.
>> CORRECT! [Just be careful with some spelling. ^^]
They told us that never give up and try to hard more after that, you can be sucessful.
>> They told us never to give up and try harder for one more time so we could be successful/
That\'s true if you can\'t give up, you\'ll acheive your goals sometime.
>> CORRECT!
You should have patience.
>> CORRECT!
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