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If an out-of-town visitor was coming to visit, I will go to Kyeongbokgung that is a palace of Chosun. This palace was built in the Chosun Dynasty and was rebuilt few decades ago. In fact, I like to go around palace. Because there is a event of setting off firecrackers in May. So I think an out-of-town visitor also lik it!

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