Homework

Hi! Connie~. I think about my ideal man, but I couldn't find some qualifications, so I had better think about my ideal house where I want to live. As everyone says that, I like big and beautiful house where looks like tale. That has many useful rooms which are filled with many beautiful furnitures, and white color is covered lots of space. So, inside of house, I can feel pure and clean. And If this house is wide, it's more nice. In front of this house, I wish,I can find small garden, so I want to raise my own plants. Of couse, I have more conditions, I can't express. I hope, I will have this house.

Hello [이름]!

Oh!  I also hope that you will own that dream house of yours in the future. 

 Your description of your ideal house is great.  I'm looking forward to visit your ideal 

house in the future haha.  Well, nothing is impossible if you'll work hard for it right?  See you!

Monica

 

Hi! Connie~. I think about my ideal man, but I couldn't find some qualifications, so I had better think about my ideal house where I want to live.

>>>correct

As everyone says that, I like big and beautiful house where looks like tale.

>>>As everybody is saying,  I like a big and beautiful house that looks like a tale.

That has many useful rooms which are filled with many beautiful furnitures, and white color is covered lots of space.

>>>That has many useful rooms which are filled with many beautiful furnitures, and white in color to make it look spacious.

So, inside of house, I can feel pure and clean.

>>>correct

And If this house is wide, it's more nice.

>>>correct

In front of this house, I wish,I can find small garden, so I want to raise my own plants.

>>>In front of this house, I want a small garden to raise my own plants.

Of course, I have more conditions, I can't express. I hope, I will have this house.

>>>correct