homework
학생이 쓴 원문
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These day,I want to buy a fish or coral.
When I see my fish tank,I want to buy,Brain coral,Moon coral,and Antias,these see animals are beautiful.
I want to buy these animals a lot.
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear TOM^^
HAPPY THURSDAY!! One more day to go before your favorite day. Thank you for re-enrolling.^^ I am so happy because you are still my student.If only I could I want to buy a fish for you, a clown fish.^^ I know you are going to love it. How was your homework? Is it tricky for you?Please go over the corrections I gave you and review the usage of articles.If you have any questions about it,just ask me during the class.I would be glad to explain it to you.See you later.Take Care!
Teacher Nina
Here are my corrections for you:
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>> the2.a
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>> Correct!4.the
>> Correct!5.the>> Correct!These day,I want to buy a fish or coral.
>> These days I want to buy a fish or a coral.When I see my fish tank,I want to buy,Brain coral,Moon coral,and Antias,these see animals are beautiful.
>> When I see my fish tank,I want to buy a Brain coral,Moon coral,and Antias,these things are beautiful.I want to buy these animals a lot.
>> I want to buy a lot of these things for my aquarium.
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