homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If I could go back in time and re-experience an event in my life, I would want to go back in an elementary school days. Because I want to change an event that happened.
When I was elementary school student, I said strong languages to my brother. And these made him hurted. So I'm always regreting what I said until now.
So if I got a chance to go back in that time, I would never make him sad.
강사 첨삭
Hi hi hi hi Ms. [Name]! Happy Friday!!
Very well said. Good job in sharing your thoughts with regards to your homework. I know your regretting what you did. I do also have siblings like you and I often say bad things to them and I also regret it afterwards.
Okay, going back, some erros are only on the spelling and some tenses to use but nevertheless, great work. Enjoy your weekend and I\'ll see on Monday!
Always,
~~ T. Kathrine
If I could go back in time and re-experience an event in my life, I would want to go back in an elementary school days.
>> CORRECT
Because I want to change an event that happened.
>> CORRECTWhen I was elementary school student, I said strong languages to my brother.
>> When I was an elementary school student, I said strong languages (words) to my brother.
>> or, When I was a student in elementary, I said strong languages (words) to my brother.
And these made him hurted.
>> And these made him hurt.
So I\'m always regreting what I said until now.
>> CORRECT (regretting)
>> or, So I always regret what I said until now. So if I got a chance to go back in that time, I would never make him sad.
>> CORRECT
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