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2013-04-26 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Essay: If you could go back in time and re-experience an event in your life, what would it be. Would you go back to change an event that happened or to re-experience a happy time? Or something else? If i could go back to past, i would go back in time when i was in middle school. And i will learn piano to be pianist. Now it's too late to change my carrer but i've always wanted to be a pianist thinkg that pianists earn money doing what they like and listening the beautiful sound of music. So, i will build my careers as a pianist if i could go back to past. Besides that time in middle school was the only time that i enjoyed the life without worring about my future.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!!! ^^ That was an amazing composition. Don\'t lose hope. They always say that things will never be too late if you really want to do it. So go ahead, learn to play the piano. Have a great evening and a wonderful weekend ahead. Teacher Kathrine ^_^   Essay: If you could go back in time and re-experience an event in your life, what would it be. Would you go back to change an event that happened or to re-experience a happy time? Or something else? If i could go back to past, i would go back in time when i was in middle school. >> If I could go back in the past, I would go back in the time when I was in middle school. And i will learn piano to be pianist. >> And I will learn to play the piano to become a professional pianist. Now it\'s too late to change my carrer but i\'ve always wanted to be a pianist thinkg that pianists earn money doing what they like and listening the beautiful sound of music. >> Now, it\'s too late to change my career. But I\'ve always wanted to be a pianist thinking that pianists earn money by doing what they like and listening to the beautiful sound of music. So, i will build my careers as a pianist if i could go back to past. >>  So, I will build my career as a pianist if I could go back in the past. Besides that time in middle school was the only time that i enjoyed the life without worring about my future. >> Beside, the time when I was in middle school was the only time where I enjoyed my life without worrying about my future.

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