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2013-04-26 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.snow 2.warm 3.windy 4.sunshine 5.shower 6.rain 7.foggy 8.clouds 9.frost 10.??? Teacher Nina! I will go to the Sanbang mountain this weekend. Sanbang mountain look numinous. When Sanbang mountain be formed there was volcano action.You have to spend nice weekend. And homework of 10 is so difficult,so can you explain ? I hate my vocabulary!!

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dearest TOM^^ HAPPY FRIDAY!!Thank you so much for sending this in. I hope that you will enjoy your weekend with your family. I hope to see Sanbang mountain in the future.You almost got a perfect score!Great job!The answer for number ten is temperature.It is the hotness or coldness of a thing.I am really excited to talk to you.Please go over the corrections I provided for you. Don\'t hate your vocabulary skills,we just need to enhance it more.Don\'t worry I will help you with that my dear TOM^^ See you later! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.snow >> Correct!2.warm >> Correct!3.windy >> Correct!4.sunshine >> Correct!5.shower >> Correct!6.rain >> Correct!7.foggy >> Correct!8.clouds >> Correct!9.frost >> Correct!10.???>> temperature Teacher Nina! >> Correct!I will go to the Sanbang mountain this weekend. >> I will go to Sanbang mountain this weekend.Sanbang mountain look numinous. >> Sanbang mountain lools numinous. When Sanbang mountain be formed there was volcano action. >> When Sanbang mountain was formed there was a volcano erruption. You have to spend nice weekend. >> You have to spend a nice weekend.And homework of 10 is so difficult,so can you explain ? >> Item number ten was so difficult,can you please explain it?I hate my vocabulary!! >> I hate my vocabulary skills.

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