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2013-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

I prefer to take my time and live life at a slower pace. But it's just my preference, but my routine. In fact, I always do something in a hurry. Of course, I have already known that I shouldn't do like it. But I don't always prepare in advance and do in a hurry. Sometimes I'm lucky and achieve in time, But sometimes I'm late and take bad result. So, to change this bad habit, I make an alarm before 1 hour, 30 minutes, 10 minutes in consecutive order and remind myself.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Ms. [Name]! ^^ I was not able to keep on smiling when I was reading your composition. Because I was just like you. That was my attitude before. I always have my alarm but all the time, I was not able to follow it. But I learned my lesson. So these days, I really tired my very best to be early in everything that I do and not to hurry because a not so good outcome will be the result of it. Nice composition anyway. Good job! I\'ll see you again on our next class! have a good day ahead! ~~ Always. T. Kathrine     I prefer to take my time and live life at a slower pace. >> CORRECT But it\'s just my preference, but my routine. >> But it\'s just my preference and not my routine. In fact, I always do something in a hurry. >> In fact, I\'m always in ahurry when I do domething.  Of course, I have already known that I shouldn\'t do like it. >> Of course, I already know that I shouldn\'t do it. But I don\'t always prepare in advance and do in a hurry. >> But I don\'t prepare in advance and I am always ina hurry. Sometimes I\'m lucky and achieve in time, But sometimes I\'m late and take bad result. >> Sometimes I am lucky to arrive in time. But sometimes, I\'m late and it will take a bad result. So, to change this bad habit, I make an alarm before 1 hour, 30 minutes, 10 minutes in consecutive order and remind myself. >> CORRECT >> or, To change this bad habit, I always make a alarm an hour, 30 minutes or 10 minutes early in a consecutive order and that I have to remind myself.  

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