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2013-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.on 2.next to 3.in 4.behind 5.on Last weekend,my mother's closefriend coming,and she spend our house. We ate Sashimi and stake(chicken),after that we take a walk on the beach. We didn't go to Sanbang mountain,but we have a lot of rest

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear TOM^^ HAPPY MONDAY!! I am so excited to talk to you. Thank you for sending this in. Congratulations! I am so proud of you! You almost got a perfect score. Don\'t forget the correct verb tenses of your sentenes,if it is already in the past,the verb should be in the past tense.I will be glad to discuss this to you later in class. WOW! You went to the beach. Tell me more about it later in class.See you!Have a fun day! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.on >> Correct!2.next to >> Correct!3.in >> Correct!4.behind >> Correct!5.on>> under Last weekend,my mother\'s closefriend coming,and she spend our house. >> Last weekend,my mother\'s close friend came and stayed in our house.We ate Sashimi and stake(chicken),after that we take a walk on the beach. >> We ate Sashimi and steak (chicken) after that we took a walk on the beach.We didn\'t go to Sanbang mountain,but we have a lot of rest >> We didn\'t go to Sanbang mountain,but we had enough rest

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