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2013-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

학생이 쓴 원문

I prefer to have new experiences in my life. It gives me that vivid, fresh and vitality. If normal life will continue, I think it's boring. I have heard that to have curious is very good to make a creativity and some of my freinds told me you're a curious man. I guess more to have curious, better to children. Because curious would be helped to their future and they'll dream about their dream based on curious. That's the main reasion why I think curious is important. People who have curious try to have new experiences and they don't worry about the results. We should try to do it that what you want and do not think its results. Fail is not a shy, it might be essential. So, whatever you want, just try to new experience.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! I agree that being curious means you are learning a lot. It truly develop our creativity and for children, this is the way they learn most. I am glad to know that you are always curious about your surrounding and I am sure you are a bright person. Keep it up! T. Jeny I prefer to have new experiences in my life. It gives me that vivid, fresh and vitality. >>I prefer to have new experiences in my life. It gives me that vivid, fresh and vitality feeling. If normal life will continue, I think it\'s boring. >> If normal life will continue, I think it will it\'s boring. I have heard that to have curious is very good to make a creativity and some of my freinds told me you\'re a curious man. >>I have heard that  curiosity is very good, it makes a person creative and some of my friends told me that I am always curious. I guess more to have curious, better to children. >>It\'s better for children to be more curious. Because curious would be helped to their future and they\'ll dream about their dream based on curious. >>Because curiosity will helpthem in their future and their dream will be base on their curiosity. That\'s the main reasion why I think curious is important. >>That is the main reason why I think curiosity is important.People who have curious try to have new experiences and they don\'t worry about the results. >>People who are curious try to have new experiences and they don\'t worry about the results. We should try to do it that what you want and do not think its results. >> We should try to do it and not to think about the result. Fail is not a shy, it might be essential. >>We should not be shy if we fail, it might be the essential to it. So, whatever you want, just try to new experience. >>So, whatever you want, just try to have new experience.

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