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2013-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.taking 2.to driving 3.with lose 4.help 5.to see Tomorrow,we will have a talent show. I will play the piano. The song is "Moon River" I'm nervous! Please give a confidence...

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Hi there TOM^^ Wow! I hope I will be able to hear you play the piano.Moon River is the favorite song of my dad. You did a nice job! I am so glad that you are doing your best everyday. Don\'t be nervous.I know you can do it.Think about your family when you play the piano.Let\'s talk more about this later in class.How was the homework? Is it difficult? Please go over the corrections my dear for your improvement.If you have any questions,feel free to raise it in class.See you later TOM^^ Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: 1.taking >> Correct!2.to driving >> driving 3.with lose >> at losing 4.help >> to help 5.to see>> Correct!Tomorrow,we will have a talent show. >> Correct! OR >> We are going to have a talent show tomorrow. I will play the piano. >> Correct!The song is \"Moon River\" >> Correct! Better: >> The title of the song is \"Moon River\".I\'m nervous! >> Correct! Please give a confidence... >> Please give me confidence. OR >> Please help me boost my self-esteem.

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