homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I recommend you just love whoever and it might be your friends, family or co-workers. Jesus told love is the best. It can't be compared to anything. When you have affection to people, you maybe more humble and you'll realize love is powerful to change your life. When I became parent, I realized parent's love to children is great. Most parents have allocated their life and even it's free so we must thankful our parents.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!!! ^^
That was a very touching composition.
It feels so happy that you realized all these.
I hope you\'ll keep up the great job!
Enjoy the last few hours of this month
and start next month right.
Have a great evening ahead.
Teacher Jeny ^_^
I recommend you just love whoever and it might be your friends, family or co-workers.
>> I recommend you to love everybody. It might be your friends, family or co-workers.
Jesus told love is the best.
>> Jesus told us that love is the best.
It can\'t be compared to anything. >> CORRECT!
When you have affection to people, you maybe more humble and you\'ll realize love is powerful to change your life.
>> When you have an affection to other people, you might be more humble and you\'ll realize that love is powerful to change your life.
When I became parent, I realized parent\'s love to children is great.
>> When I became a parent, I realized that parent\'s love to their children is great.
Most parents have allocated their life and even it\'s free so we must thankful our parents.
>> Most parents have allocated their life and even their freedom that\'s why we must be thankful to our parents.
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