homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Hello. This is [이름]. I'm going to my home. Thank you for your answer eventhough my insufficient English speaking.
Beliw is my homework.
If you will only have 24 hours to live, what would you do?
Answer: If I will only have 24hours to live, I will have a time with my family. I will talk that I love my family. And we will have a happy time.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Ms. [이름]! :)
Thank you so much for sending this composition.
It\'s my pleasure to help you in any way I can. :)
I\'m also proud on how you were able to explain something about your study.
I really learned a lot. :)
Anyway, for your further improvement, I encourage you to write or talk more in English. :)
This will help you improve your grammar. :)
But all in all, you did great today! :) Goodnight and sweet dreams! :)
Always,
T. Isabel :)
Dear [Name],
>>Correct!Hello.
>>Correct!
This is [이름].
>>Correct!
I\'m going to my home.
>>Correct!
>>OR: I\'m going home.
Thank you for your answer eventhough my insufficient English speaking.
>>DID YOU MEAN: Thank you for your thoughts eventhough my English speaking is insufficient.Beliw is my homework.>>Correct! [Below]
If you will only have 24 hours to live, what would you do?Answer: If I will only have 24hours to live, I will have a time with my family.
>>If I will only have 24 hours to live, I will spend time with my family.
I will talk that I love my family.
>>I will tell my family that I love them.
And we will have a happy time.
>>Correct!
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